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The clap could be a little bit quieter at the start. It's still pretty repetitive, as you said, but the sounds feel like they're a lot better designed than the original. The chords are also much smoother. The ending is a lot smoother than the original, nice touch there. This is probably your best quality song thus far.

The guitar could be a bit quieter at the start, and the vocals a bit louder. The drums could use a little bit more emphasis on them. The vocals were well-done. I feel like the main guitar could be slightly less gritty, and the vocals at the end, along with what sounded like a secondary clap beat, could've been slightly quieter. Good song, though. :)

Very nice. Drums feel a bit awkward for some parts of this song. Overall, it's got a very smooth sound. I feel like a secondary melody would be pretty nice throughout the song. During the ending melody, before it gets slightly louder again, it would've probably sounded nice with some extra reverb. The ending feels a bit plastered on, but is ok.

This feels like you're lost in thoughts, memories, or a puzzle game. Love it. :D

ForgottenDawn responds:

Thanks! Especially puzzle games, since that's all I've been playing these days, haha.

This reminds me heavily of mass effect, very nice. I feel like this could be less ambient during the first minute or so, but it's still pretty nice. I particularly like the last minute.

ForgottenDawn responds:

Thank you! Well, it's actually three separate tracks stitched together. In the game, they're supposed to switch on and off depending on the situation. The ambient part is for when you're doing... well, nothing. :')

The start was kinda awkward. The percussion at the start. is way too loud. Whatever you're using for the first melody could use some reverb. I understand it stopping completely before hitting hard at around 1:20, but it should stop more smoothly. Overall, this could've been better mastered, but this is a pretty good attempt.

The snare could've come in a bit quieter. The baseline could be a bit quieter, and the song overall could have more variation. This also doesn't loop very well, and the ending could use some work.

The lyrics are ok, but I feel like more stuff could be going on in the background. This is probably one of your better overall quality songs, including variation.

Your hithat throughout the song could be a bit quieter. Also, this is pretty repetitive.

The percussion comes in a bit heavy, they could start a bit softer. You could add some reverb to the baseline, it'd make it sound a bit smoother. The part right after the drop sounds a bit bland, maybe add some reverb to that last note. The variation is nice, and the ending is short but not bad. I feel like what you used for the melodies could've had a little bit more 'oomph' to it.

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