Overall this turned out pretty nicely. I do feel you could have chosen a better kick, or possibly not a kick at all for the into percussion though.
Overall this turned out pretty nicely. I do feel you could have chosen a better kick, or possibly not a kick at all for the into percussion though.
The composition of this is pretty interesting. That said, the mastering has quite a few issues where your sounds are walking over each other. The sound design could also use some work, as if you had EQed a few of your sounds, they could have meshed together much better than they did.
Never heard anything like this before. Sounds somewhere in between disco, jazz, and pop, and the intro and outro sound almost classical.
This is nothing short of fabulous. I especially love the sweeping effect that enters during the first refrain, and the way you layered the vocals during the second one.
Very nice, seemed a little muddy in spots but otherwise great.
Wonderful atmosphere you have throughout this. The ending felt unsatisfying, though, as it doesn't really feel like any part of it is a conclusion.
Ok :) thanks for feedback
The mixing and mastering is really great in this one, even though the composition feels a bit dull. That hilarious ending can't go unmentioned, however.
You have decent composition, but your sound design sounds really basic, to me. You could definitely use some light reverb on the piano in the intro, too.
Instrumentation could be a bit better, and the vocals would sound better if they sounded more analogous, I think. Regardless, this has an excellent concept behind it.
Agreed. I could have spent more time on the instrumentation. Not sure what I could have done about the voice except use different software (or perhaps experiment with inputting alternate spelling / nonsense syllables).
Can't wait for when you've gotten used to it, it'll sound wonderful.
I can't wait either! So much more alive than the other pianos I've used. Thanks for listening :)
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Joined on 12/15/15